Our own feedback

Me and Matthew sat down this afternoon and looked at the music video as well, these are a few of the things we thought we could improve

• During the car scene there's a out of focus shot.
• We really didn't like the newspaper part.
• We thought that the edits didn't build up to anything (it was too slow) round the OH my god chorus.
• Think we should re shoot The build up to the chorus (think we should include him screaming into the camera.)
• Add a few more shots into the office scene.
• Add a few more shots where he is throwing the monitor out of the window.

From this we will talk to our actor and re edit and re film the bits that we need to do will give ourselves three days to get to the next cut stage of the project.